Hello there. I'm Zafirah.

Zafirah walks down the shiny path. She laughs, then cries. She continues, then stops as if something was in her way. She puts her hands out, but nothing is there "I must be insane" she says to herself. She drops to her knees and cries even harder. "No your not." she hears. she hears footsteps come closer. Scared she runs down the street, now off the path. She sees what looks like a library. She can defenitally hide in there. She runs faster and into the library. "NO!" she hears and stops on the steps, but some thing semms to pull her in. She goes inside. The sound of that voice still echoing in her head.

((umm... Past tense please, no puppetmastering, and I moved it to the long rps for you. Try again just in this topic. If it doesn't work do a short one.))

Zafirah walked down the shiny path. She laughed, then cried. She continued walking, then stopped as if something was in her way. She put her hands out, but nothing was there "I must be insane" she said to herself. She dropped to her knees and cried even harder. "No you're not." she heard. She heard footsteps coming closer. Scared she ran down the street, now off the path. She saw what looked like a library. She could defenitally hide in there. She ran faster to the library. "NO!" she heard and stopped on the steps, but something seemed to pull her in. She went inside. The sound of that voice still echoing in her head.

(( Better, but you're still puppet mastering. You may want to try just role playing in the Short RPs.))

((that was Mitchel talking))